From 41e20d205c367401193f5bcbf833838c03effe6d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?S=C3=A9bastien=20Bourdeauducq?= <sb@m-labs.hk>
Date: Thu, 15 Feb 2024 12:34:01 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] shop: improve wording

---
 static/js/shop_data.js | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/static/js/shop_data.js b/static/js/shop_data.js
index f9fae68..4155d7b 100644
--- a/static/js/shop_data.js
+++ b/static/js/shop_data.js
@@ -50,11 +50,11 @@ const shop_data = {
     options: [
       {"type": "Group", items:[
         {type: "Switch", args: {
-          title: "Include optional Intel® NUC mini-computer with pre-installed ARTIQ software",
+          title: "Optional pre-installed NUC mini-computer",
           outvar: "nuc",
-          tip: "OS: latest stable NixOS with Gnome or KDE with pre-installed ARTIQ software. " +
-               "Hardware (other choices available): Intel® NUC 13 Pro Kit NUC13ANKi7, i7-1360P CPU, " +
-               "32GB RAM from reputable vendor, 1TB M.2 NVM Express SSD from reputable vendor.",
+          tip: "Pre-installed NixOS desktop with ARTIQ and other scientific software. " +
+               "Hardware: Intel® NUC 13 Pro Kit NUC13ANKi7, i7-1360P CPU, " +
+               "32GB RAM, 1TB NVMe. Other options contact us.",
           fallback: true,
         }},
         {
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ const shop_data = {
               {
                 type: "Radio",
                 args: {
-                  title: "Desktop Environment",
+                  title: "Desktop Environment:",
                   outvar: "nuc_desktop",
                   variants: ["Gnome", "KDE"],
                   fallback: 0,
@@ -72,13 +72,13 @@ const shop_data = {
                 }
               },
               {type: "Line", args: {title: "Additional software to be pre-installed", outvar: "software", fallback: "",
-                  tip: "Pre-install additional software, if needed."}},
+                  tip: "Most software from nixpkgs can be pre-installed."}},
               {"if": [
                 {"var": "ext_data.has_crate"},
                 {type: "Switch", args: {
-                    title: "Include promotional USB stick",
+                    title: "Promotional USB stick",
                     outvar: "include_usb_stick_nuc",
-                    tip: "Choose if you need a USB stick with device database and other relevant files. Alternative is to to receive them via other electronic means (e.g. email or cloud).",
+                    tip: "Branded USB stick with device database and other relevant files. Files can also be emailed to you.",
                     fallback: false,
                   }}
               ]},
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ const shop_data = {
         {
           type: "Radio",
           args: {
-            title: "Shipping options",
+            title: "Shipping options:",
             outvar: "shipping",
             variants: [
               "Incoterms 2020 FCA",
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ const shop_data = {
         ]},
         {"if": [
             {"==": [{"var": "shipping"}, "Prepay and add shipping (only available to credit customers)"]},
-            [{type: "Radio", args: {title: "In case of additional customs fees",
+            [{type: "Radio", args: {title: "In case of additional customs fees:",
                 outvar: "prepay_fees_handling", fallback: 0,
                 variants: [
                   "Add to your final invoice",
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ const shop_data = {
     ],
 
     prices: [{
-      "if": [{"var": "nuc"}, {title: "Include optional pre-installed Intel® NUC mini-computer", price: 1300, disable_patch: {"nuc": false}, id: "nuc"}],
+      "if": [{"var": "nuc"}, {title: "Pre-installed NUC mini-computer", price: 1300, disable_patch: {"nuc": false}, id: "nuc"}],
     }],
     shippingSummary: [
       {type: "Label", args: {